He produced the biggest prettiest dick I ever did see
Kept the longest erection I’ve ever seen a man keep
Ate everything from pussycat
To tossed salad
And had the audacity
To shuffle around my guts
Til I collapsed and fell asleep
Once awakened
I was greeted by butterflies
Coming from the pink mountains between my hips
Pulsating faster than the speed of sound
Spellbound
The poem hits you in the face in the beginning. Then, at the end, you get this soft yet vibrant imagery: “Once awakened
I was greeted by butterflies
Coming from the pink mountains between my hips”
Then to finish the moment, there isnthisbsense of thrumming energy, of waiting on the brink, of teetering on the edge with newfound wings:
“Pulsating faster than the speed of sound
Spellbound”
A delight to read. I love poems with an element of surprise. I expected one, and you delivered. 👏👏👏👏
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